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@Grlucs, per your suggestions, I've made the corrections. Please review. I look forward to your feedback. Thank you.

:{{Reply to| KForeman}} looking better. All parenthetical page numbers should be removed and added to the {{tl|sfn}}. Check your page numbers in {{tl|pg}}. Footnotes should have no spaces around them; periods and commas go ''inside'' quotation marks and before the footnotes. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 10:28, 19 April 2025 (EDT)

@Grlucs, per your suggestions, I've made changes, please review. Thank you.

=Remediation of "Cluster Seeds and the Mailer Legacy"=

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The only thing I have left is going through all of the links to do away with harvtxt and sfn target error and an error for extra text in the author section. I fixed the error about using an "en" dash between years.

I'll still be working on it until tomorrow night, but please take a look: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Hemingway_and_Women_at_the_Front:_Blowing_Bridges_in_The_Fifth_Column,_For_Whom_the_Bell_Tolls,_and_Other_Works

@grlucas

I’ve gotten rid of the second of three error messages. Still looking for the harvtxt sfn target error.

[[User:LogansPop22|LogansPop22]] ([[User talk:LogansPop22|talk]]) 14:45, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

@grlucas

I’ve gone through every citation. Did the YEARa and YEARb designations. Made sure there weren’t extra spaces or missing {, |, or anything else.

I’ve corrected everything I can find after extensive proofreading. I still have the harvtxt and sfn no target error.

Here it is: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Hemingway_and_Women_at_the_Front:_Blowing_Bridges_in_The_Fifth_Column,_For_Whom_the_Bell_Tolls,_and_Other_Works

[[User:LogansPop22|LogansPop22]] ([[User talk:LogansPop22|talk]]) 19:50, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

== Articles complete ==

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[[User:MerAtticus|MerAtticus]] ([[User talk:MerAtticus|talk]]) 14:11, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

== Combat ==

Hello

For your review [https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/What_Norman_Mailer_Taught_Me_about_Combat|What Norman Mailer Taught Me about Combat].

Completed by me and @Flowersbloom

[[User:Tbara4554|Tbara4554]] ([[User talk:Tbara4554|talk]]) 18:45, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

== Article Completed ==

Hi Dr. Lucas - I have finished the article [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/“A_Noble_Pursuit”:_The_Armies_of_the_Night_as_Outside_Agitator|“A Noble Pursuit”: The Armies of the Night as Outside Agitator]]. Please let me know if any changes are needed. Thanks!--[[User:Chelsey.brantley|Chelsey.brantley]] ([[User talk:Chelsey.brantley|talk]]) 19:13, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

== A Dialogue Essay on Mailer and Hemingway ==

I believe I have finished remediating this [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/A Dialogue Essay on Mailer and Hemingway|article]]. [[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 22:44, 20 April 2025 (EDT)

== Volume 4 ==

https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JBawlson/sandbox

Hi Dr. Lucas! I've finished remediating my article.

== Diligently Continuing to Remediate ==

Hi, I remediated the article, [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/Norman vs. Ernest: Influence and Identity|Norman vs. Ernest: Influence and Identity]].

I'm not sure if it will count towards the editing grade because it is overdue, but I wanted to keep editing volume 4. I really would like to get it to complete status.

I am having a major error, and I'm positive it has to do with the roman numeral citations. Please help me out with this if you can.

Ex. p=xii–xiii --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 15:22, 24 April 2025 (EDT)

Disregard the sfn error. I found a solution. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 07:53, 25 April 2025 (EDT)

== Further Remediation ==

I'm currently remediating the article, [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/A_Visionary_Hermeneutic_Appropriation:_Meditations_on_Hemingway’s_Influence_on_Mailer|A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer]] I've complete a good chunk of it, but it is very long. I will try to finished it this weekend. I'm not sure if anyone else is still remediating in an attempt to finish the volumes. When I finish this article, there will be no more left in Volume 4. I'm not sure about volume 5 yet and will investigate later. I did have to create the page from scratch, so there is no "under construction" notice. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 15:23, 25 April 2025 (EDT)

:{{Reply to| APKnight25}} that is very kind of you. I appreciate all of the extra work, but do not kill yourself. I don't believe that anyone else is working; see [[Special:RecentChanges]]. That said, any additional will look very good for your evaluation. Thanks! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 16:15, 25 April 2025 (EDT)

== Finished Remediating A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer ==

I believe that I'm finished remediating [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/A_Visionary_Hermeneutic_Appropriation:_Meditations_on_Hemingway’s_Influence_on_Mailer|A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer]]. I think that all of Volume 4 is remediated. This was a really fun and informative experience, so thank you. I wish future students well in editing volumes. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 14:05, 28 April 2025 (EDT)

:{{Reply to| APKnight25}} awesome! Again, that you ''so'' much for going above-and-beyond. I’m glad you enjoyed it—I do, too. 😀 —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 12:03, 29 April 2025 (EDT)

== Final Project ==

@Grlucus

*Group Participation:

I participated with the group on Mailer’s The Prisoner of Sex. I added sources to the bibliography and also added to the section in the sandbox for “Principal Characters.” This section required a bullet list of characters and a paragraph to discuss the role they played in the story.

User:GradStudent74/The Prisoner of Sex - Wikipedia

User:GradStudent74/The Prisoner of Sex/Bibliography - Wikipedia

*Article for Individual Development:

I chose to edit an article about my hometown because it has a rich history. I enjoyed reading the article and learned many things that I never knew.

Talk:Bridgeport, Connecticut - Wikipedia

Bridgeport, Connecticut - Wikipedia

User:Poeticjewel

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 @Grlucs, per your suggestions, I've made the corrections.  Please review. I look forward to your feedback.  Thank you.
 :{{Reply to| KForeman}} looking better. All parenthetical page numbers should be removed and added to the {{tl|sfn}}. Check your page numbers in {{tl|pg}}. Footnotes should have no spaces around them; periods and commas go ''inside'' quotation marks and before the footnotes. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 10:28, 19 April 2025 (EDT)
+@Grlucs, per your suggestions, I've made changes, please review.  Thank you.
 =Remediation of "Cluster Seeds and the Mailer Legacy"=
@@ Line 459: / Line 460: @@
 The only thing I have left is going through all of the links to do away with harvtxt and sfn target error and an error for extra text in the author section. I fixed the error about using an "en" dash between years.
 I'll still be working on it until tomorrow night, but please take a look: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Hemingway_and_Women_at_the_Front:_Blowing_Bridges_in_The_Fifth_Column,_For_Whom_the_Bell_Tolls,_and_Other_Works
+@grlucas
+I’ve gotten rid of the second of three error messages. Still looking for the harvtxt sfn target error.
+[[User:LogansPop22|LogansPop22]] ([[User talk:LogansPop22|talk]]) 14:45, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
+@grlucas
+I’ve gone through every citation. Did the YEARa and YEARb designations. Made sure there weren’t extra spaces or missing {, |, or anything else.
+I’ve corrected everything I can find after extensive proofreading. I still have the harvtxt and sfn no target error.
+Here it is: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Hemingway_and_Women_at_the_Front:_Blowing_Bridges_in_The_Fifth_Column,_For_Whom_the_Bell_Tolls,_and_Other_Works
+[[User:LogansPop22|LogansPop22]] ([[User talk:LogansPop22|talk]]) 19:50, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
 == Articles complete ==
@@ Line 501: / Line 512: @@
 [[User:MerAtticus|MerAtticus]] ([[User talk:MerAtticus|talk]]) 14:11, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Combat ==
+Hello
+For your review [https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/What_Norman_Mailer_Taught_Me_about_Combat|What Norman Mailer Taught Me about Combat].
+Completed by me and @Flowersbloom
+[[User:Tbara4554|Tbara4554]] ([[User talk:Tbara4554|talk]]) 18:45, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Article Completed ==
+Hi Dr. Lucas - I have finished the article [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/“A_Noble_Pursuit”:_The_Armies_of_the_Night_as_Outside_Agitator|“A Noble Pursuit”: The Armies of the Night as Outside Agitator]]. Please let me know if any changes are needed. Thanks!--[[User:Chelsey.brantley|Chelsey.brantley]] ([[User talk:Chelsey.brantley|talk]]) 19:13, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
+== A Dialogue Essay on Mailer and Hemingway ==
+I believe I have finished remediating this [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/A Dialogue Essay on Mailer and Hemingway|article]]. [[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 22:44, 20 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Volume 4  ==
+https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JBawlson/sandbox
+Hi Dr. Lucas! I've finished remediating my article.
+== Diligently Continuing to Remediate ==
+Hi, I remediated the article, [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/Norman vs. Ernest: Influence and Identity|Norman vs. Ernest: Influence and Identity]].
+I'm not sure if it will count towards the editing grade because it is overdue, but I wanted to keep editing volume 4. I really would like to get it to complete status.
+I am having a major error, and I'm positive it has to do with the roman numeral citations. Please help me out with this if you can.
+Ex. p=xii–xiii --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 15:22, 24 April 2025 (EDT)
+Disregard the sfn error. I found a solution. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 07:53, 25 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Further Remediation ==
+I'm currently remediating the article, [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/A_Visionary_Hermeneutic_Appropriation:_Meditations_on_Hemingway’s_Influence_on_Mailer|A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer]] I've complete a good chunk of it, but it is very long. I will try to finished it this weekend. I'm not sure if anyone else is still remediating in an attempt to finish the volumes. When I finish this article, there will  be no more left in Volume 4. I'm not sure about volume 5 yet and will investigate later. I did have to create the page from scratch, so there is no "under construction" notice. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 15:23, 25 April 2025 (EDT)
+:{{Reply to| APKnight25}} that is very kind of you. I appreciate all of the extra work, but do not kill yourself. I don't believe that anyone else is working; see [[Special:RecentChanges]]. That said, any additional will look very good for your evaluation. Thanks! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 16:15, 25 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Finished Remediating A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer ==
+I believe that I'm finished remediating [[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/A_Visionary_Hermeneutic_Appropriation:_Meditations_on_Hemingway’s_Influence_on_Mailer|A Visionary Hermeneutic Appropriation: Meditations on Hemingway’s Influence on Mailer]]. I think that all of Volume 4 is remediated. This was a really fun and informative experience, so thank you. I wish future students well in editing volumes. --[[User:APKnight25|APKnight25]] ([[User talk:APKnight25|talk]]) 14:05, 28 April 2025 (EDT)
+:{{Reply to| APKnight25}} awesome! Again, that you ''so'' much for going above-and-beyond. I’m glad you enjoyed it—I do, too. 😀 —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 12:03, 29 April 2025 (EDT)
+== Final Project ==
+@Grlucus
+*Group Participation:
+I participated with the group on Mailer’s The Prisoner of Sex.  I added sources to the bibliography and also added to the section in the sandbox for “Principal Characters.” This section required a bullet list of characters and a paragraph to discuss the role they played in the story.
+User:GradStudent74/The Prisoner of Sex - Wikipedia
+User:GradStudent74/The Prisoner of Sex/Bibliography - Wikipedia
+*Article for Individual Development:
+I chose to edit an article about my hometown because it has a rich history.  I enjoyed reading the article and learned many things that I never knew.
+Talk:Bridgeport, Connecticut - Wikipedia
+Bridgeport, Connecticut - Wikipedia
+User:Poeticjewel