User talk:Grlucas

Archive 202504

Final edits

Dr. Lucas, I have finished remediating my assigned article. Please review it at your earliest convenience. The link is here: Norman Mailer's Mythmaking in An American Dream and “The White Negro”—Erhernandez (talk) 08:52, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

@Erhernandez: well done! A couple of things: never bury your talk page post. Put it at the bottom, preferably in its own section by clicking "Add topic" on the top-right. I removed your banner after making a few corrections. Please have a look over it and move on to the next thing. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 09:06, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I transferred and edited my article. Can you look at it and remove the banner? Here's the link: Authorship and Alienation in Death in the Afternoon and Advertisements for Myself ( APKnight25 (talk) 13:02, 28 March 2025 (EDT) )

@APKnight25: looking good! A couple of things: never bury your talk page post. Put it at the bottom, preferably in its own section by clicking "Add topic" on the top-right. Next, eliminate all "fang" quotes in the article and add “real quotation marks.” Your sources should be a bulleted list. And there should be no space before a citation. You’re almost finished! —Grlucas (talk) 11:21, 30 March 2025 (EDT)

Hello, Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. May I have the banner removed?KJordan (talk) 20:13, 22 September 2020 (EDT)KJordan

@KJordan: Maybe. You should always link to something you want me to have a look at, please. —Grlucas (talk) 20:14, 22 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You. Here is a link to it: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Heart_of_the_Nation:_Jewish_Values_in_the_Fiction_of_Norman_Mailer --AMurray (talk) 21:56, 23 September 2020 (EDT)

@AMurray: Looking good! However, I still see quote a few typos. There should be no space before a footnote or citation. And all parenthetical citations need to be converted. I also see a lot of missing punctuation, especially around citations. —Grlucas (talk) 07:24, 24 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. Will you please review? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Unknown_and_the_General --Jrdavisjr (talk) 09:00, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

@Jrdavisjr: It looks good. Let's go through editing week and see if anything else comes up. —Grlucas (talk) 10:15, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JSheppard/sandbox JSheppard (talk)

@JSheppard: You have a lot of work left to do. I see User:Jules Carry is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —Grlucas (talk) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I finished my article. https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know RWalsh (talk) 15:15, 8 February 2021 (EST)

@RWalsh: Not quite, but it's looking good. Clean it up and begin helping others. —Grlucas (talk) 07:11, 9 February 2021 (EST)

Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished editing my article. Will you please review? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/%E2%80%9CHer_Problems_Were_Everyone%E2%80%99s_Problems%E2%80%9D:_Self_and_Gender_in_The_Deer_Park Klcrawford (talk) 09:06, 15 February 2021 (EST)

@Klcrawford: Great work. I have removed the working banner. I would appreciate it if you began to assist some of the other editors. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 13:04, 15 February 2021 (EST)

Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself JFordyce (talk) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce

Hello Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished my article. Can you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Request EKrauskopf (talk) 13:06, 22 Februrary 2021 (EST)

@EKrauskopf: OK, looks good. Well done. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —Grlucas (talk) 06:41, 23 February 2021 (EST)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished and cleaned up my article. Could you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know RWalsh (talk) 12:35, 23 February 2021 (EST)

@RWalsh: OK, nice job. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —Grlucas (talk) 13:47, 23 February 2021 (EST)

Hello Dr.Lucas final edits have been made and the article is finished.https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_MyselfJFordyce (talk) 22:27, 2 March 2021 (EST) JFordyce

Remediation of "Reinventing the Wheel" Mailer Article for Review

Dr. Lucas,

My article is ready for review.

Thank you! TPoole (talk) 15:29, 29 March 2025 (EDT)

@TPoole: great! Could you include a link to it? Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 11:07, 30 March 2025 (EDT)

OK, I found it. Looking really good. Great work. There are some citation issues that need to be seen to. The two red categories at the bottom should not be there; they will go away when the citations errors are corrected. Eliminate any quotation mark "fangs" in the text and replace them with “real quotation marks.” Let me know if you need help. —Grlucas (talk) 11:14, 30 March 2025 (EDT)

@Grlucas, what are the citation issues? Which ones need correcting? TPoole (talk) 17:31, 31 March 2025 (EDT)

@TPoole: When you click your citations, they should jump to the works cited entry they correspond to. Several of yours do not, indicated by the red “Harv and Sfn no-target errors” at the bottom. You also have a "CS1 maint: Unrecognized language" error that will likely be cleared up when you fix the citation issues. —Grlucas (talk) 08:55, 1 April 2025 (EDT)

@Grlucas, I have tried correcting the sfn codes in my citations. I was able to get the 2 web citations to link correctly. But for some reason, I cannot get the Mailer 1967 film Wild 90 citation to link to the reference list. Please advise. TPoole (talk) 20:24, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

@TPoole: OK, all fixed and published. Thanks. Please move on to another remediation. —Grlucas (talk) 08:46, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

Remediation of: "Contradictory Syntheses: Norman Mailer’s Left Conservatism and the Problematic of 'Totalitarianism'"

Dr. Lucas

I finished the remediation of the following article:

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Contradictory_Syntheses:_Norman_Mailer%E2%80%99s_Left_Conservatism_and_the_Problematic_of_%E2%80%9CTotalitarianism%E2%80%9D

It is ready for your review. Thank you. JKilchenmann (talk) 19:04, 30 March 2025 (EDT)

@JKilchenmann: looks great. I made some tweaks to the references and some throughout, like changing ' and " to real apostrophes and quotation marks. A bit more clean-up, but you might want to check over it again. I removed the under-construction banner. Well one. —Grlucas (talk) 21:32, 30 March 2025 (EDT)

Final Edit

Thank you for your comments on my remediation of "Authorship and Alienation in Death in the Afternoon and Advertisements for Myself."

I've eliminated the "fang quotes" and changed them to “real quotation marks.” This was a very fascinating tip that taught me something new. It's something I've never noticed before but now always will.

I also put my sources in a bulleted list and removed the space before the citations. I think I'm all set now.

@APKnight25: great work! Please help other editors to complete the volume. Thanks! —Grlucas (talk) 08:34, 3 April 2025 (EDT)

Remediation for Firearms in the Works of Hemingway and Mailer

Grlucas

Hi Dr. Lucas,

I believe I have done everything for the Remediation of my article. Please let me know if there is anything else I need to do.

I will also link the article below:

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/Firearms_in_the_Works_of_Hemingway_and_Mailer

Thank you, Caitlin Vinson

@CVinson: great work so far. Your references must use templates, please. Blockquotes must also be done correctly. No spaces or line breaks before or after the {{pg}} template. Footnote placement is also off (punctuation goes before the footnote; no spaces before or after the footnote). I will add the abstract and url. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 08:30, 3 April 2025 (EDT)

Remediation for Norman Mailer Today

Dr. Lucas, I have finished up my remediation article Norman Mailer Today, and it is ready for review. Please let me know if I missed something. Thank you! —Kamyers (talk) 18:20, 3 April 2025 (EDT)

@Kamyers: Great work! Please help your fellow editors finish the volume, or pick something to work on in Volume 4. Thanks, and well done. —Grlucas (talk) 07:00, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

Remediation of “The Conception of Irreversibility: Hannah Arendt and Hemingway’s ‘Hills Like White Elephants’”

Dr. Lucas, I have finished my remediation of Jennifer Yirinec's article: The Conception of Irreversibility: Hannah Arendt and Hemingway’s “Hills Like White Elephants.” Thank you for your assistance with the article. It is ready for its final review! JHadaway (talk) 10:24, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

@JHadaway: a stellar job. Well done. I removed the banner, so you can move on to another article. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 08:12, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

Tribute Remediations

Dr. Lucas, I have begun work on the tributes for volume 5. Grace Notes by Stephen Borkowski is ready for its final review.—JHadaway (talk) 12:58, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

@JHadaway: Well done! Banner removed, url added. —Grlucas (talk) 08:18, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

Oohh Normie Final Edits

Hi Dr. Lucas, I have finished my article: Oohh Normie, You're Sooo Hemingway. Please let me know if there is anything I need to fix. Tbara4554 (talk) 20:01, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

@Tbara4554: thank you. I made some corrections and removed the banner. You might want to have another look over it. Please move on to something else. —Grlucas (talk) 09:53, 6 April 2025 (EDT)

Harlot's Ghost, Bildungsroman, Masculinity and Hemingway

Dr. Lucas,

The following article is ready for your review. Thanks.

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/Harlot%27s_Ghost,_Bildungsroman,_Masculinity_and_Hemingway

JKilchenmann (talk) 21:22, 5 April 2025 (EDT)

@JKilchenmann: excellent. Thank you. —Grlucas (talk) 09:39, 6 April 2025 (EDT)

I am done with this

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_5,_2011/Situating_Hemingway:_Mailer,_Style,_Ethics