Talk:An American Dream Expanded/Publishers Weekly March 22, 1965

@Dillbug, Grlucas, JVbird, JenniferMGA, Mango Masala, Namir Riptide, Roger C. Byrd, Sherita Sims-Jones, and Waebo: Looks so funky to me with so much dead space...can we create an image gallery like on Apple Pages App...or what can we do?(Dmcgonagill (talk) 14:39, 23 April 2019 (EDT))

@Dmcgonagill, Grlucas, JVbird, JenniferMGA, Mango Masala, Namir Riptide, Sherita Sims-Jones, and Waebo: I felt the same way. I tried to space out the paragraphs a little to no avail. Still looks 'funky'. I was wondering if we could only show the pages with Mailer's review and leave the other pages out. I am unfamiliar with Apple Pages App (age showing again)but if you think that would work, let's try it. I was going to ask Dr. Lucas what we should do, unless someone has a better idea.--Dillbug (talk) 17:00, 23 April 2019 (EDT)

@Dillbug: Added ellipses and moved pictures to both side. Like? Feels warmer to me. Thanks.(Dmcgonagill (talk) 14:11, 24 April 2019 (EDT))

@Dmcgonagill: I don't think you need all of the images — they don’t add much really. In fact, most of them should be cropped and inverted, so it's black on white. That said, if you want all of the images, use a simple gallery like on the AAE Expanded page. —Grlucas (talk) 16:35, 24 April 2019 (EDT)

@Dmcgonagill: The images look much, much better and I love the addition of the ellipses (wish I had thought of that). Great work! Love it!--Dillbug (talk) 19:33, 24 April 2019 (EDT)