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:::::: {{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} The code is this, right: [[w:Norman Mailer|Norman Mailer]] Right? [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 23:35, 6 April 2019 (UTC) | :::::: {{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} The code is this, right: [[w:Norman Mailer|Norman Mailer]] Right? [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 23:35, 6 April 2019 (UTC) | ||
:::::::{{reply to| JVbird| Dmcgonagill}} Mailer has his own page here, so any links to him should just be <code><nowiki>[[Norman Mailer]]</nowiki></code>. If you're just linking his last name, you can use this code, too: <code><nowiki>{{NM}}</nowiki></code>. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 12:40, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | :::::::{{reply to| JVbird| Dmcgonagill}} Mailer has his own page here, so any links to him should just be <code><nowiki>[[Norman Mailer]]</nowiki></code>. If you're just linking his last name, you can use this code, too: <code><nowiki>{{NM}}</nowiki></code>. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 12:40, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | ||
::::::::{{reply to| Grlucas|Dmcgonagill}} Thanks, Dr. Lucas! [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 15:29, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:::::::{{reply to|Dmcgongill}{{reply to|JVbird}} When you put the 'w:' inside the bracket, make sure you use the double colons as well.--[[User:Dillbug|Dillbug]] ([[User talk:Dillbug|talk]]) 23:46, 6 April 2019 (UTC) | :::::::{{reply to|Dmcgongill}{{reply to|JVbird}} When you put the 'w:' inside the bracket, make sure you use the double colons as well.--[[User:Dillbug|Dillbug]] ([[User talk:Dillbug|talk]]) 23:46, 6 April 2019 (UTC) | ||
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{{reply to|JVbird|Mango Masala}} I added a citation for each detail except '''She was the mother of two children and stepmother of Norman Mailer's five children.''' Can either of you find which source could support that and add a citation? It is interesting combing closer through the support documents that a couple of them give opposing facts to support opposing ideas about the Norman Norris marriage and relationship. Future contributors, could surely add supporting evidence on that. Anyhow, I'm done contributing to this. For a first legit group effort, I think this looks pretty good. Thanks y'all.([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|talk]]) 15:14, 7 April 2019 (UTC)) | {{reply to|JVbird|Mango Masala}} I added a citation for each detail except '''She was the mother of two children and stepmother of Norman Mailer's five children.''' Can either of you find which source could support that and add a citation? It is interesting combing closer through the support documents that a couple of them give opposing facts to support opposing ideas about the Norman Norris marriage and relationship. Future contributors, could surely add supporting evidence on that. Anyhow, I'm done contributing to this. For a first legit group effort, I think this looks pretty good. Thanks y'all.([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|talk]]) 15:14, 7 April 2019 (UTC)) | ||
::::::::::{{reply to |Dmcgonagill|Mango Masala}} I sure will, Dana. I even thought of taking that out entirely, the reference to children, but it seemed to me a salient fact, although whether it belongs where I placed it, I am not ultimately sure. ([[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 15:26, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | ::::::::::{{reply to |Dmcgonagill|Mango Masala}} I sure will, Dana. I even thought of taking that out entirely, the reference to children, but it seemed to me a salient fact, although whether it belongs where I placed it, I am not ultimately sure. ([[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 15:26, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | ||
::::::::::{{reply to |Dmcgonagill|JVbird}} Well done and thank you, guys! I will look for sources and add citation if found. Josef, I also thought about omitting info about children...I suppose whether we find citations or not will determine its fate.[[User:Mango Masala|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala|talk]]) 15:41, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::{{reply to |Mango Masala|Dmcgonagill}} I found the source, Berger, added that citation, and then adjusted a couple of the words in the headers. That last one seemed more appropriate for the word Legacy, Death and Legacy...See what you think. [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 15:49, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::{{reply to| JVbird|}} Smashing, Josef! I like Legacy and Death, thanks. And, thank you {{reply to|Dillbug}} for trimming. I also see the red source indicating a non-existent page...I'm not certain what to look for in the code...did you use a template? [[User:Mango Masala|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala|talk]]) 20:22, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::{{reply to|Mango Masala|Grlucas}} Let's ask Dr. Lucas, then, since we're all stumped. Any suggestions for correcting the problem we are seeing with the non existent page for this source on the NCM bio: Bragg, M. A. (November 23, 2010). "Provincetown Arts 'hero' Mailer is missed". Newsgroup: CapeCodOnline.com. Retrieved 2010-11-26. Thanks! [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 20:38, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Sherita Sims-Jones|Waebo}} I reduced the total to exactly 200 words without taking anything relevant out. Please everyone review and let me know if you agree. Note to Joseph: I like Death and Legacy very much! --[[User:Dillbug|Dillbug]] ([[User talk:Dillbug|talk]]) 17:27, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Sherita Sims-Jones|Waebo}} Looks great, Sandy! Any idea what is up with that one red source in the References list? When I hover over it, I get a note that the source does not exist. I'll check to see if I can figure out the citation but I'm the last one to be able to "see" errors in the codes UGH --[[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 17:31, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:{{reply to |JVbird}} That red is due to the website being out of service I believe, but I don't know what else to do because that was the link provided by the source.([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|talk]]) 22:04, 7 April 2019 (UTC)) | |||
:::{{reply to|JVbird|Dmcgonagill}} It didn’t recognize “newsgroup. Chnaged it to work and corrected the site to the current one fixed the error. [[User:Namir Riptide|Namir Riptide]] ([[User talk:Namir Riptide|talk]]) 23:45, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
::{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Waebo}} Fabulous job. This bio if very specific, concise, and to the point. Please let me know if I need to do or add anything else. -[[User:ssimsjones|ssimsjones]] ([[User talk:ssimsjones|talk]]) 16:11, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
::{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala |Namir Riptide}} This Bio is looking really good. Is there anything else we could add or something that someone needs help with?[[User:Waebo|Waebo]] ([[User talk:Waebo|talk]]) 23:34, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:::{{reply to|Dillbug|Weabo}} I am not sure what needs to be changed, but looking it over with critical eyes, maybe prints with red pens, maybe the most help. I know I changed some some wording. [[User:Namir Riptide|Namir Riptide]] ([[User talk:Namir Riptide|talk]]) 23:45, 7 April 2019 (UTC) | |||