Talk:An American Dream Expanded/Publishers Weekly Currents, March 23, 1965

@Dmcgonagill: Dana, I posted the transcript of the Press Conference, but I am not sure about the format itself. The original obviously has a column system for the different sections, but is that necessary here? Tell me what you think and I'll adjust it accordingly. Josef --JVbird (talk) 12:45, 23 April 2019 (EDT)

@JVbird: Looks good. I got on for a minute, but I have to go. I'll be back up around 130 & will look more closely. Thanks!(Dmcgonagill (talk) 12:48, 23 April 2019 (EDT))

@JVbird: Added ellipses and removed titles except for the From blah blah blah...following what Dr. Lucas's linked reference...watchu think? Nice work! That was a long piece!!!(Dmcgonagill (talk) 14:19, 23 April 2019 (EDT))

@Dmcgonagill: Looks great! Do you want me to work on others in that list you created? I can use more practice for sure but I don't want to hog from the list! :) JVbird (talk) 14:53, 23 April 2019 (EDT)

@JVbird: Get the practice! There is plenty to do! Just my opinion. Careful linking off my list because I have learned the hard way how not to link off the subpage so I am learning how to move them. Just click on the link from the link on the photo in the gallery on the aaed page and you will be golden! Thanks!(Dmcgonagill (talk) 14:56, 23 April 2019 (EDT))

@Grlucas: Please help with Displaytitle! Thanks!. (Dmcgonagill (talk) 14:28, 23 April 2019 (EDT))

@JVbird and Dillbug: What do y'all think about the subheadings? If you look at the previous noted with adding ellipses you can compare. Thanks!(Dmcgonagill (talk) 13:30, 24 April 2019 (EDT))

@Dmcgonagill: I think the page title needs to be changed — something like An American Dream Expanded/Publishers Weekly Currents, March 23, 1965. Also, while I appreciate your transcribing the whole thing, only the parts that have to do with Mailer really should be done — including images. Thanks! —Grlucas (talk) 16:30, 24 April 2019 (EDT)

@Dmcgonagill, Jvbird, and Grlucas: I think I am going to have to agree with Dr. Lucas. Right now the sight looks a little overwhelming!. I suggest editing to only information relevant to Mailer.--Dillbug (talk) 19:36, 24 April 2019 (EDT)