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 :::::::::::{{reply to |Mango Masala|Dmcgonagill}} I found the source, Berger, added that citation, and then adjusted a couple of the words in the headers. That last one seemed more appropriate for the word Legacy, Death and Legacy...See what you think. [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 15:49, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+::::::::::::{{reply to| JVbird|}} Smashing, Josef! I like Legacy and Death, thanks. And, thank you {{reply to|Dillbug}} for trimming. I also see the red source indicating a non-existent page...I'm not certain what to look for in the code...did you use a template? [[User:Mango Masala|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala|talk]]) 20:22, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+::::::::::::::{{reply to|Mango Masala|Grlucas}} Let's ask Dr. Lucas, then, since we're all stumped. Any suggestions for correcting the problem we are seeing with the non existent page for this source on the NCM bio: Bragg, M. A. (November 23, 2010). "Provincetown Arts 'hero' Mailer is missed". Newsgroup: CapeCodOnline.com. Retrieved 2010-11-26.  Thanks!  [[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]])  20:38, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 {{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Sherita Sims-Jones|Waebo}}  I reduced the total to exactly 200 words without taking anything relevant out. Please everyone review and let me know if you agree. Note to Joseph: I like Death and Legacy very much! --[[User:Dillbug|Dillbug]] ([[User talk:Dillbug|talk]]) 17:27, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 :{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Sherita Sims-Jones|Waebo}} Looks great, Sandy! Any idea what is up with that one red source in the References list? When I hover over it, I get a note that the source does not exist. I'll check to see if I can figure out the citation but I'm the last one to be able to "see" errors in the codes UGH  --[[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]])  17:31, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+:{{reply to |JVbird}} That red is due to the website being out of service I believe, but I don't know what else to do because that was the link provided by the source.([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|talk]]) 22:04, 7 April 2019 (UTC))
+:::{{reply to|JVbird|Dmcgonagill}} It didn’t recognize “newsgroup. Chnaged it to work and corrected the site to the current one fixed the error. [[User:Namir Riptide|Namir Riptide]] ([[User talk:Namir Riptide|talk]]) 23:45, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+::{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala|Namir Riptide|Waebo}} Fabulous job. This bio if very specific, concise, and to the point. Please let me know if I need to do or add anything else. -[[User:ssimsjones|ssimsjones]] ([[User talk:ssimsjones|talk]]) 16:11, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+::{{reply to|Dillbug|Dmcgonagill|JVbird|JenniferMGA|Mango Masala |Namir Riptide}} This Bio is looking really good. Is there anything else we could add or something that someone needs help with?[[User:Waebo|Waebo]] ([[User talk:Waebo|talk]]) 23:34, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
+:::{{reply to|Dillbug|Weabo}} I am not sure what needs to be changed, but looking it over with critical eyes, maybe prints with red pens, maybe the most help. I know I changed some some wording. [[User:Namir Riptide|Namir Riptide]] ([[User talk:Namir Riptide|talk]]) 23:45, 7 April 2019 (UTC)