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:{{Reply to| JSheppard}} You have a '''lot''' of work left to do. I see [[User:Jules Carry]] is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)
:{{Reply to| JSheppard}} You have a '''lot''' of work left to do. I see [[User:Jules Carry]] is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)
== When we Were Kings 1st remediation ==
[[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary|https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary]]
Here is the link for the remediation I did for this weeks assignment. I did not now where to place the link.
Thank you,
Trevor Ryals

Revision as of 19:13, 2 February 2021

Article Errors

I've added the body of the article to my sandbox page. What errors do I need to specifically change in order to make it correct?CDucharme (talk) 17:04, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

@CDucharme: Mostly you need to add the notes, citation, and read for typos. It’s meticulous, but that’s the job. (Thanks for signing.) —Grlucas (talk) 17:08, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

Final edits

Hello, Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. May I have the banner removed?KJordan (talk) 20:13, 22 September 2020 (EDT)KJordan

@KJordan: Maybe. You should always link to something you want me to have a look at, please. —Grlucas (talk) 20:14, 22 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You. Here is a link to it: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Heart_of_the_Nation:_Jewish_Values_in_the_Fiction_of_Norman_Mailer --AMurray (talk) 21:56, 23 September 2020 (EDT)

@AMurray: Looking good! However, I still see quote a few typos. There should be no space before a footnote or citation.[1] And all parenthetical citations need to be converted. I also see a lot of missing punctuation, especially around citations. —Grlucas (talk) 07:24, 24 September 2020 (EDT)
  1. Like this.

Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. Will you please review? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Unknown_and_the_General --Jrdavisjr (talk) 09:00, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

@Jrdavisjr: It looks good. Let's go through editing week and see if anything else comes up. —Grlucas (talk) 10:15, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JSheppard/sandbox JSheppard (talk)

@JSheppard: You have a lot of work left to do. I see User:Jules Carry is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —Grlucas (talk) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

When we Were Kings 1st remediation

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary

Here is the link for the remediation I did for this weeks assignment. I did not now where to place the link.

Thank you, Trevor Ryals