Talk:A Fear of Dying: Norman Mailer's An American Dream

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Essay Suggestions

@Dmcgonagill: This is looking great! I see you have done much careful work here. Good job.

First, you should remove everything that is not about the central article: “A Fear of Dying.” You can remove the images, too. If you want to include an image, the first page of the journal would be a good one. We don't need the list of books by NM (we have one) and we don't need his little bio (we have one of those, too). Remove the "Projects" category and add [[Category:Full Text Articles]]. Your permission inbox is good, but add the full citation, please.

That seems to be it. Again, great job. —Grlucas (talk) 13:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

@Grlucas: Thanks for the feedback. Suggestions done. Citation is at the bottom, should it go there or where? Does the full citation need a header '''Works Cited'''. Do I move the essay anywhere or leave it here until directed further? Thanks. (Dmcgonagill (talk) 13:42, 30 March 2019 (UTC))

Posted!

@Dmcgonagill: OK, all posted — great work. I made a few tweaks and added an image. You might want to proofread the article for any typos. Otherwise, we can call it finished! —Grlucas (talk) 14:37, 30 March 2019 (UTC)