User talk:AMurray

Article

Good work on your article. However, you should never cut and paste a whole article; you deleted some of the fixes User:Jules Carry made in your works cited (check your history). Did you notice the corrections before you overwrite them? Also, be sure to proofread and fix typos. —Grlucas (talk) 06:44, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

More Editing Needed

Hello, I copied the bulk of your article to your sandbox for editing. You have a lot of extraneous spacing in your formatting that needs to be eliminated. Otherwise, you’re doing a great job! Let me or User:Grlucas know if you have questions. —Jules Carry (talk) 11:17, 16 September 2020 (EDT)