User talk:PLowery

Article Progress

Good progress on your article, but there are errors to eliminate and it needs to be in the proper location to be complete. You have issues with the references; please go over those again. Also, the parenthetical citations must be changed to the correct shortened footnotes. You do not include the necessary bottom elements of the article; see Remediating Articles again. There’s still quite a bit to do! (And please remember to sign your talk page posts.) —Grlucas (talk) 08:26, 19 June 2021 (EDT)

OK, I added your works cited to the article, and added a paragraph to show you how the footnote/citations should be coded. Let me know if you have more questions. —Grlucas (talk) 09:31, 19 June 2021 (EDT)

Article on Mainspace

You deleted all of the corrections I made to your article on the mainspace. Why? You must be more careful while editing. How can you see errors after saving and just leave them there—especially when they were not there to begin with? I have reverted your most recent change that gave no consideration to what was already posted to the article. I recommend you pay closer attention when you go to finish your article again. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 07:57, 23 June 2021 (EDT)

I did not realize I had deleted what you had corrected. I was thinking the corrections were done in the sandbox where I was working. Please re-check my mainspace.

@PLowery: First, please sign your talk page posts. Yes, the article looks better after your recent edit. However, the article’s original curly quotations “ ” and ‘ ’ have been replaced by straight ones " and ' — this must be corrected. There are still quite a few typos, usually around footnotes and punctuation. You need not tell me you’re finished. Just edit, and I will see what you’ve done. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 14:17, 23 June 2021 (EDT)