{{reply to |grlucas}} Feeling ready to post this review or edit with further direction or model from you on desire
:{{reply to| Dmcgonagill}} All set. Sorry I missed this when you originally posted it.
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...y to|Jules Carry}} Jules, can you look at this page and the title and link to AADE? Thanks--[[User:JVbird|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird|talk]]) 10:49, 24
::{{reply to|JVbird}} It's looking great. Well done. --[[User:Jules Carry|Jules Carry]]
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...me know if it's correct. I updated the Works cited citations. I also tried to make sure I removed all HTML citation coding. Please let me know if I am mi
...ould be no space between the end of the word and the footnote. “---” needs to be replaced with “Mailer.” If you correct these issues, I can give it a
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...d hurt. Perhaps just a link to the Wikipedia article? Or both? Do you want to write it? --[[User:Jules Carry|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules Carry|talk]
::{{reply to|Jules Carry}} When I tried to create a link, I got no Wikipedia link exists, but of course it does. I'll
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{{reply to|grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, this is my sub page for the Trotter letter. Does is lo
:{{reply to|Mango Masala}} All set. Nice job! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:
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...he same with my first letter to Don Brown (1964) and cannot figure out how to do so correctly.--[[User:Dillbug|Dillbug]] ([[User talk:Dillbug|talk]]) 15:
...in the footnotes? I just used the introduction to the letter and moved it to footnotes. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 19:46,
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{{reply to|grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I added the letter from Trotter to AAD Expanded. Please review as I'm uncertain why the left half is chopped u
...hat letter should be transcribed on its own page, I think. Are you willing to do that? Thanks! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 1
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...g the same thing...I'm currently going with linking to WWII but can I link to both? Thanks. ([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|ta
:{{reply to| Dmcgonagill}} Yes, he means WWII. I wouldn't bother with the other link.
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{{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} Dana, I posted the transcript of the Press Conference, but I
:{{reply to|JVbird}} Looks good. I got on for a minute, but I have to go. I'll be back up around 130 & will look more closely. Thanks!([[User:Dmc
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{{reply to|Jules Carry}} Would you make a link in the notes <like I did with Morales>
:{{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} Yeah, why not, if the person has a page on Wikipedia. —[[Us
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...m Expanded#Discussion|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|tal
:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala
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...han source editor? I ask, because I cannot figure out how to link the info to Michael McClure separately from Don Carpenter's reference. I would really a
::{{reply to|Dillbug}} I made a change for you. Don't be afraid to make little changes in the footnotes where appropriate. —[[User:Grlucas|G
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...e to the original (an echo) or it requests the opposite. (The child wishes to strike its sister—it says instead, “I love my sister.”)
...s banished to be persecuted later when the Self produces its own child. So to the psyche (which I use for {{LJ:H}} vs. {{LJ:S}}) every attitude has its r
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...Norman Mailer and the Life-Study|this article]]. I thought you might want to fix them yourself. —[[User:Jules Carry|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules C
Thanks for the compliment, and the information. I appreciate the opportunity to make these corrections. [[User:JREubanks|JREubanks]] ([[User talk:JREubanks
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...sala|Namir Riptide|Roger C. Byrd|Sherita Sims-Jones|Waebo}} Looks so funky to me with so much dead space...can we create an image gallery like on Apple P
...showing again)but if you think that would work, let's try it. I was going to ask Dr. Lucas what we should do, unless someone has a better idea.--[[User:
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{{Reply to|AWalker}} Great work on your remediation! I have made some corrections and
...lease go back though and fix them, using my corrections as examples of how to do this complex article correctly. I know there are a lot of details, but t
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{{reply to|Grlucas}} Please help me with two editing issues for Appendix III. First, b
...— make your width narrower and you'll see what I mean. It needs to be able to work on all-sized screens. Make sense? Here's another rule: no more <code><
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Great work on your article. I made a few changes and less obvious tweaks to help out. Let me know if you have any questions and keep up the good work!
:Thank You {{Reply to|Jules Carry}}. I have a question. It seems while I was creating more edits,
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{{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} This is looking great! I see you have done much careful work
...al article: “A Fear of Dying.” You can remove the images, too. If you want to include an image, the first page of the journal would be a good one. We don
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