User talk:TRyals

Moved article

Good day. I moved the body of your article to your sandbox for editing. Please let me know if you have any questions. —Jules Carry (talk) 09:13, 3 February 2021 (EST)

Please do your edits in your sandbox, as User:Jules Carry suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has way too many errors to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —Grlucas (talk) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)

I also started the article for you, for reference. —Grlucas (talk) 09:12, 10 February 2021 (EST)

Progress but Still Errors

Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)

Hello —User:Grlucas I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you TRyals (talk) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)

@TRyals: check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —Grlucas (talk) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

Hello -User:Grlucas I was trying to figure out what sourcing errors there were on this articles. We could not figure it out. Could you point it out to us? Thank you. --ALogan (talk) 22:36, 27 February 2021 (EST)