Talk:Lipton’s Journal: Difference between revisions

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#	NM#	First Words	x-Refs	Cut	Notes
1	1	Perhaps the artist is less
2	2	Lipton's seems to open one
3	3	Fucking is perhaps an approach
4	4	In relation to (1)	L1		Note.
5	5	The concentration camp novel	x		Note. Unclear x-ref # in note.
6	6	One should always listen attentively			Note.
7	7	Herbert A[ptheker]. said of Lipton’s			Note.
8	8	In modern jazz, one feels			Note.
9	9	Thoreau’s beautiful remark			Note.
10	10	I upset Herbert [Aptheker] by saying
11	11	In a short novel		x	Note.

#	NM#	First Words	x-Refs	Cut	Notes
12	12	One should always try to		x
13	13	It seems to me that
14	14	It is possible that many			Note. Handwritten at end by NM: “That is a skin may be capable of all sexual enjoyment, but the one of laying conquering hands whom a woman’s nudity.”
15	15	All of my life with Adele
16	16	If there is that other world
17	17	Listening to a child
18	18	I advertise to everyone
19	19	Six and Four are close
20	20	Knowledge is systematized ignorance
21	21	A novel is slowly emerging
22	22	It may be that the
23	23	In the conc. camp novel	L17
24	24	There may actually be such
25	25	Every word sets up	L24		Note.
26	26	Television may have some extraordinary			Note.
27	27	Possibly the spasmodic nervous system
28	28	Vomiting may be the orgasm
29	29	No saint can be a teacher
30	30	Infants may be enormously wise
31	31	The saint and the psychopath			Note.
32	32	No one is more unreligious
33	33	Medicine may be witchcraft			end: [and] its emphasis on progress.
34	34	The aggressive instinct

What do we want to do with omitted entry numbers? Just skip them? Or should they be included in the digital version but not the printed?
Are the numbers on Donna’s transcript the new, correct numbers? (I know Mike said that Mailer mis-numbered some entries.)
Should each entry date have its own index page? Perhaps each numbered entry could be summarized here?
Should each numbered entry should have its own (sub)page? I think yes.
Should each numbered entry have a title other than a number? Each could have a shortcut, so if the title is Lipton’s Journal/December 1, 1954/1, the shortcut could be LJ1 or just L1.
Should we categorize numbered entries? Thematically? Style of entry?

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+| 1 || 1 || Perhaps the artist is less || || ||
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-| 2 || 2 || Lipton's seems to open one ||  || ||
+| 2 || 2 || Lipton's seems to open one || || ||
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-| 3 || 3 || Fucking is perhaps an approach ||  || ||
+| 3 || 3 || Fucking is perhaps an approach || || ||
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-| 4 || 4 || In relation to (1) || x || || Link to L1.
+| 4 || 4 || In relation to (1) || L1 || || Note.
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-| 5 || 5 || The concentration camp novel || x || || Unclear x-ref # in note.
+| 5 || 5 || The concentration camp novel || x || || Note. Unclear x-ref # in note.
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-| 6 || 6 || One should always listen attentively ||  || ||
+| 6 || 6 || One should always listen attentively ||  || || Note.
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-| 7 || 7 || Herbert A[ptheker]. said of Lipton’s ||  || ||
+| 7 || 7 || Herbert A[ptheker]. said of Lipton’s ||  || || Note.
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-| 8 || 8 || In modern jazz, one feels || || ||
+| 8 || 8 || In modern jazz, one feels || || || Note.
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-| 9 || 9 || Thoreau’s beautiful remark || || ||
+| 9 || 9 || Thoreau’s beautiful remark || || || Note.
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 | 10 || 10 || I upset Herbert [Aptheker] by saying || || ||
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-| 11 || 11 || In a short novel || || x ||
+| 11 || 11 || In a short novel || || x || Note.
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