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Hassan Essay Edits

@Mango Masala: Please see the comments I left for Dillbug about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Template:Reply toGrlucas Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. Mango Masala (talk) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

@Mango Masala: I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —Grlucas (talk) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

@Grlucas: Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that corresponds accordingly. Mango Masala (talk) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

@Mango Masala: It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —Grlucas (talk) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

@Grlucas: Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. Mango Masala (talk) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

@Mango Masala: Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in WorldCat and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk)

07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)

@Grlucas: Dr. Lucas, I researched in World Cat to add publishing houses (where I could); I couldn't locate some of the sources. I did include the complete title as some of Hassan's were incomplete.12:35, 24 April 2019 (EDT)