View source for Talk:A Fear of Dying: Norman Mailer's An American Dream

== Essay Suggestions ==

{{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} This is looking great! I see you have done much careful work here. Good job.

First, you should remove everything that is not about the central article: “A Fear of Dying.” You can remove the images, too. If you want to include an image, the first page of the journal would be a good one. We don't need the list of books by NM ([[Norman Mailer's First Editions|we have one]]) and we don't need his little bio ([[Norman Mailer|we have one of those]], too). Remove the "Projects" category and add <code><nowiki>[[Category:Full Text Articles]]</nowiki></code>. Your permission inbox is good, but add the full citation, please.

That seems to be it. Again, great job. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 13:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

:{{reply to |Grlucas}} Thanks for the feedback. Suggestions done. Citation is at the bottom, should it go there or where? Does the full citation need a header <code><nowiki>'''Works Cited'''</nowiki></code>. Do I move the essay anywhere or leave it here until directed further? Thanks. ([[User:Dmcgonagill|Dmcgonagill]] ([[User talk:Dmcgonagill|talk]]) 13:42, 30 March 2019 (UTC))

== Posted! ==

{{reply to|Dmcgonagill}} OK, all posted — great work. I made a few tweaks and added an image. You might want to proofread the article for any typos. Otherwise, we can call it finished! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 14:37, 30 March 2019 (UTC)