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Good work on your article. However, you should never cut and paste a whole article; you deleted some of the fixes [[User:Jules Carry]] made in your works cited (check your history). Did you notice the corrections before you overwrite them? Also, be sure to proofread and fix typos. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 06:44, 14 September 2020 (EDT) | Good work on your article. However, you should never cut and paste a whole article; you deleted some of the fixes [[User:Jules Carry]] made in your works cited (check your history). Did you notice the corrections before you overwrite them? Also, be sure to proofread and fix typos. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 06:44, 14 September 2020 (EDT) | ||
== More Editing Needed == | |||
Hello, I copied the bulk of your article to [[User:AMurray/sandbox|your sandbox]] for editing. You have a lot of extraneous spacing in your formatting that needs to be eliminated. Otherwise, you’re doing a great job! Let me or [[User:Grlucas]] know if you have questions. —[[User:Jules Carry|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules Carry|talk]]) 11:17, 16 September 2020 (EDT) | |||