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Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)
Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)
Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)
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