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Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself [[User:JFordyce|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce|talk]]) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce
Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself [[User:JFordyce|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce|talk]]) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce
Hello Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished my article. Can you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Request [[User:EKrauskopf|EKrauskopf]] ([[User talk:EKrauskopf|talk]]) 13:06, 22 Februrary 2021 (EST)


== When we Were Kings 1st remediation ==
== When we Were Kings 1st remediation ==

Revision as of 14:07, 22 February 2021

Article Errors

I've added the body of the article to my sandbox page. What errors do I need to specifically change in order to make it correct?CDucharme (talk) 17:04, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

@CDucharme: Mostly you need to add the notes, citation, and read for typos. It’s meticulous, but that’s the job. (Thanks for signing.) —Grlucas (talk) 17:08, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

Final edits

Hello, Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. May I have the banner removed?KJordan (talk) 20:13, 22 September 2020 (EDT)KJordan

@KJordan: Maybe. You should always link to something you want me to have a look at, please. —Grlucas (talk) 20:14, 22 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You. Here is a link to it: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Heart_of_the_Nation:_Jewish_Values_in_the_Fiction_of_Norman_Mailer --AMurray (talk) 21:56, 23 September 2020 (EDT)

@AMurray: Looking good! However, I still see quote a few typos. There should be no space before a footnote or citation.[1] And all parenthetical citations need to be converted. I also see a lot of missing punctuation, especially around citations. —Grlucas (talk) 07:24, 24 September 2020 (EDT)
  1. Like this.

Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. Will you please review? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Unknown_and_the_General --Jrdavisjr (talk) 09:00, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

@Jrdavisjr: It looks good. Let's go through editing week and see if anything else comes up. —Grlucas (talk) 10:15, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JSheppard/sandbox JSheppard (talk)

@JSheppard: You have a lot of work left to do. I see User:Jules Carry is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —Grlucas (talk) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

Dr. Lucas, I finished my article. https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know RWalsh (talk) 15:15, 8 February 2021 (EST)

@RWalsh: Not quite, but it's looking good. Clean it up and begin helping others. —Grlucas (talk) 07:11, 9 February 2021 (EST)

Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished editing my article. Will you please review? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/%E2%80%9CHer_Problems_Were_Everyone%E2%80%99s_Problems%E2%80%9D:_Self_and_Gender_in_The_Deer_Park Klcrawford (talk) 09:06, 15 February 2021 (EST)

@Klcrawford: Great work. I have removed the working banner. I would appreciate it if you began to assist some of the other editors. Thanks. —Grlucas (talk) 13:04, 15 February 2021 (EST)

Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself JFordyce (talk) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce

Hello Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished my article. Can you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Request EKrauskopf (talk) 13:06, 22 Februrary 2021 (EST)

When we Were Kings 1st remediation

https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary

Here is the link for the remediation I did for this weeks assignment. I did not now where to place the link.

Thank you, Trevor Ryals

@TRyals: Thank you, but this is unnecessary. Just do the work; I promise I will see it. (And be sure to sign your talk page posts.) —Grlucas (talk) 18:16, 2 February 2021 (EST)