User talk:BDaughtry

Vince Article

This will be a tough article to remediate. I helped with the first ¶ to give you an example of how you should approach. Let me know if you have questions, and I’ll try to help out as you go along. —Jules Carry (talk) 12:02, 12 June 2021 (EDT)

I went ahead and moved the work you've done in the mainspace to your sandbox for editing. I’m going to try to clean up and help with the article in the mainspace, but I did not want you to lose any of your work. Let me know if you have questions. Like Grlucas states below: I would approach this article a paragraph at a time, otherwise it will get overwhelming. Jules Carry (talk) 08:20, 20 June 2021 (EDT)

Advice

I would work a ¶ at a time for the Vince article. That way, you can be sure each ¶ is correct rather than having to go back and correct them. This is a less-confusing approach. —Grlucas (talk) 12:34, 15 June 2021 (EDT)