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We’ve been seeing no one of any interest. Yesterday we drove out to Edgy Berman’s{{refn|Unknown.}} farm, and Phoebe (they both send remembrances) showed us a wonderful piece of property near them. It has a small waterfall and a narrow stream running through it. I’ve been wondering about it as an ideal spot for a long cherished dream of mine—a small weekend house. We think it may be possible to widen the pool to a real swimming place and dam up the stream at the further end. Then we could build a house above the water, stock the pool with bass or trout. Maybe this is the place we can write the Mailer and Lindner books from in a couple years—with time out for swimming or skating or fishing! In any event, I’m more excited about this than I’ve been about anything recently—and maybe it will go through.
We’ve been seeing no one of any interest. Yesterday we drove out to Edgy Berman’s{{refn|Unknown.}} farm, and Phoebe (they both send remembrances) showed us a wonderful piece of property near them. It has a small waterfall and a narrow stream running through it. I’ve been wondering about it as an ideal spot for a long cherished dream of mine—a small weekend house. We think it may be possible to widen the pool to a real swimming place and dam up the stream at the further end. Then we could build a house above the water, stock the pool with bass or trout. Maybe this is the place we can write the Mailer and Lindner books from in a couple years—with time out for swimming or skating or fishing! In any event, I’m more excited about this than I’ve been about anything recently—and maybe it will go through.


About ''The Fifty-Minute Hour'',{{refn|Each chapter of Lindner’s 1955 book is a case study of one of his patients.}} I guess I’ve written it off now. Lerner’s preface,{{refn|Journalist and educator [[w:Max Lerner|Max Lerner]] (1902-1992) wrote the preface to ''The Fifty-Minute Hour''.}} as I said, is terrific. He’s done exactly what I hoped—described the book as writing in a new literary genre, and emphasized the intrinsic excitement of the stories. [Rinehart editors] Ted{{LJ:Amussen}} and Dudley [Frasier] feel there is a chance of having a selling success—for a change—and I’m sure that if Ivan [Von Auw] brings off the ''Harper’s'' thing, we’ll get off to a good start. The “concerning” part—at least until reviews come in—is over. But it isn’t over for me (curiously, do you think?) about your book. I find I get more exercised about ''Deer Park'' than about my own book. Your report about the conference with Stan{{LJ:Rinehart}} and Ted was much too brief; I hope you’ll expand when you write. What irks me is this: that the reaction of Stan is likely to be the reaction of any publisher I can think of (did you say this or am I being bright?), and at least at Rinehart’s you have a friend at court. It has probably taken courage for Ted to stand up for you as he did. But what’s to be done? Will Stan give the book what it should have if he continues to feel the way he does? Does it really matter? And then I’d like to ask you about your own feelings regarding the two scenes that seem to be the big thorns for Stan. I recall when I read the orgy scene, I told you it left me with a feeling of dissatisfaction. I thought your own doubts about it were showing at that time, and I remember saying that I thought you should either do it or forget it. Now I think it would be a serious artistic error (and a compromise that might harm you) to drop the scene; but I do believe it has to be really written, in detail, full orchestra. (Of course, I don’t know if you’ve done more with it since I saw the manuscript in January.) As for the Teppis scene,{{refn|Depiction in ''[[The Deer Park]]'' of Herman Teppis, a Hollywood producer, getting a blow job. It caused Rinehart to cancel publication of the novel.}} when we talked about it last time you convinced me it was essential stat. I remain convinced—the scene is tightly and intrinsic (if not, perhaps, entirely necessary) to the portrait of T. But on this I’d bet a house Stan can be convinced.
About ''The Fifty-Minute Hour'',{{refn|Each chapter of Lindner’s 1955 book is a case study of one of his patients.}} I guess I’ve written it off now. Lerner’s preface,{{refn|Journalist and educator [[w:Max Lerner|Max Lerner]] (1902-1992) wrote the preface to ''The Fifty-Minute Hour''.}} as I said, is terrific. He’s done exactly what I hoped—described the book as writing in a new literary genre, and emphasized the intrinsic excitement of the stories. Ted{{LJ:Amussen}} and Dudley{{refn|Dudley Frasier was also an editor at Rinehart.}} feel there is a chance of having a selling success—for a change—and I’m sure that if Ivan brings off the ''Harper’s'' thing, we’ll get off to a good start. The “concerning” part—at least until reviews come in—is over. But it isn’t over for me (curiously, do you think?) about your book. I find I get more exercised about ''Deer Park'' than about my own book. Your report about the conference with Stan{{LJ:Rinehart}} and Ted was much too brief; I hope you’ll expand when you write. What irks me is this: that the reaction of Stan is likely to be the reaction of any publisher I can think of (did you say this or am I being bright?), and at least at Rinehart’s you have a friend at court. It has probably taken courage for Ted to stand up for you as he did. But what’s to be done? Will Stan give the book what it should have if he continues to feel the way he does? Does it really matter? And then I’d like to ask you about your own feelings regarding the two scenes that seem to be the big thorns for Stan. I recall when I read the orgy scene, I told you it left me with a feeling of dissatisfaction. I thought your own doubts about it were showing at that time, and I remember saying that I thought you should either do it or forget it. Now I think it would be a serious artistic error (and a compromise that might harm you) to drop the scene; but I do believe it has to be really written, in detail, full orchestra. (Of course, I don’t know if you’ve done more with it since I saw the manuscript in January.) As for the Teppis scene,{{refn|Depiction in ''[[The Deer Park]]'' of Herman Teppis, a Hollywood producer, getting a blow job. It caused Rinehart to cancel publication of the novel.}} when we talked about it last time you convinced me it was essential ''stat''.{{refn|A typesetter’s annotation that something excluded should be added back in.}} I remain convinced—the scene is tightly and intrinsic (if not, perhaps, entirely necessary) to the portrait of T. But on this I’d bet a house Stan can be convinced.


It is, finally, distressing to think that we’ll be out of personal contact for the next few months. All of us will, of course, be thinking of both of you every day. Believe me, it will be the one blot on our own vacation. We’ll be leaving for Low House on July 31st—just previous to that, when I get your Mexico address, I’ll send you the address. I’ll hope, too, that you might realize on the off-chance and join us there late in August. At least let me consider this improbability a possibility.
It is, finally, distressing to think that we’ll be out of personal contact for the next few months. All of us will, of course, be thinking of both of you every day. Believe me, it will be the one blot on our own vacation. We’ll be leaving for Low House on July 31st—just previous to that, when I get your Mexico address, I’ll send you the address. I’ll hope, too, that you might realize on the off-chance and join us there late in August. At least let me consider this improbability a possibility.
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