User talk:TRyals - Revision history

ALogan at 03:37, 28 February 2021

2021-02-28T03:37:41Z

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	:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)		:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

	Hello - [User:Grlucas]] I was trying to figure out what sourcing errors there were on this articles. We could not figure it out. Could you point it out to us? Thank you. --[[User:ALogan\|ALogan]] ([[User talk:ALogan\|talk]]) 22:36, 27 February 2021 (EST)		Hello -[[User:Grlucas]] I was trying to figure out what sourcing errors there were on this articles. We could not figure it out. Could you point it out to us? Thank you. --[[User:ALogan\|ALogan]] ([[User talk:ALogan\|talk]]) 22:36, 27 February 2021 (EST)

ALogan at 03:36, 28 February 2021

2021-02-28T03:36:57Z

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	Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)		Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)
	:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)		:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello - [User:Grlucas]] I was trying to figure out what sourcing errors there were on this articles. We could not figure it out. Could you point it out to us? Thank you. --[[User:ALogan\|ALogan]] ([[User talk:ALogan\|talk]]) 22:36, 27 February 2021 (EST)

Grlucas: /* Progress but Still Errors */ Added more.

2021-02-26T15:13:02Z

Progress but Still Errors: Added more.

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	Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)		Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)
	:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)		:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

Grlucas: /* Progress but Still Errors */ Reply.

2021-02-26T14:57:29Z

Progress but Still Errors: Reply.

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	Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)		Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

TRyals: /* Progress but Still Errors */

2021-02-26T07:12:59Z

Progress but Still Errors

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	Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)		Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)

Grlucas: /* Progress but Still Errors */ new section

2021-02-24T14:17:36Z

Progress but Still Errors: new section

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	Please do your edits in your sandbox, as [[User:Jules Carry]] suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has '''way too many errors''' to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)		Please do your edits in your sandbox, as [[User:Jules Carry]] suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has '''way too many errors''' to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)
	:I also started the article for you, for reference. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:12, 10 February 2021 (EST)		:I also started the article for you, for reference. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:12, 10 February 2021 (EST)

			== Progress but Still Errors ==

			Your article should not be in the mainspace in its current shape. Most errors are with sources and punctuation. You are also missing most of your work cited entries. Please fix these soon, or I will move this back to your sandbox for editing. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:17, 24 February 2021 (EST)

Grlucas: /* Moved article */ Added note.

2021-02-10T14:12:38Z

Moved article: Added note.

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	Please do your edits in your sandbox, as [[User:Jules Carry]] suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has '''way too many errors''' to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)		Please do your edits in your sandbox, as [[User:Jules Carry]] suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has '''way too many errors''' to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)
			:I also started the article for you, for reference. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:12, 10 February 2021 (EST)

Grlucas at 13:54, 10 February 2021

2021-02-10T13:54:42Z

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	Good day. I moved the body of your article to your sandbox for editing. Please let me know if you have any questions. —[[User:Jules Carry\|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules Carry\|talk]]) 09:13, 3 February 2021 (EST)		Good day. I moved the body of your article to your sandbox for editing. Please let me know if you have any questions. —[[User:Jules Carry\|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules Carry\|talk]]) 09:13, 3 February 2021 (EST)

			Please do your edits in your sandbox, as [[User:Jules Carry]] suggested. I moved your edited article back to your sandbox, as it has '''way too many errors''' to be in the main space. As you edit and correct the article, you may move it piece by piece to the main space. You may ask questions here. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 08:54, 10 February 2021 (EST)

Jules Carry: /* Moved article */ new section

2021-02-03T14:13:10Z

Moved article: new section

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== Moved article ==

Good day. I moved the body of your article to your sandbox for editing. Please let me know if you have any questions. —[[User:Jules Carry|Jules Carry]] ([[User talk:Jules Carry|talk]]) 09:13, 3 February 2021 (EST)

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	Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)		Hello —[[User:Grlucas]] I see that you mentioned punctuation errors can you please tell me what specific issues you are seeing with punctuation? I would also gladly accept any other in depth advice for thinks to fix. I have been going off the example you gave the class. Thank you [[User:TRyals\|TRyals]] ([[User talk:TRyals\|talk]]) 02:12, 26 February 2021 (EST)
	:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)		:{{reply to\|TRyals}} check punctuation placement with footnotes. Punctuation should go before the footnotes. (I'm making an assumption here, since I'm not sure what article you're talking about.) Thanks. . . . OK, I had a look, and it looks like you're making great progress. I made a couple of corrections and left you a note in the history. There two sourcing errors (see at the bottom of the page after Categories:) that need to be taken care of. Let me know if you can't find them. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 09:57, 26 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello - [User:Grlucas]] I was trying to figure out what sourcing errors there were on this articles. We could not figure it out. Could you point it out to us? Thank you. --[[User:ALogan\|ALogan]] ([[User talk:ALogan\|talk]]) 22:36, 27 February 2021 (EST)