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Mango Masala at 16:35, 24 April 2019

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	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)		::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]])
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			:::::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I researched in World Cat to add publishing houses (where I could); I couldn't locate some of the sources. I did include the complete title as some of Hassan's were incomplete.12:35, 24 April 2019 (EDT)

Grlucas: Reply.

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Reply.

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	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)

Mango Masala at 20:22, 16 April 2019

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	:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

Grlucas at 22:44, 12 April 2019

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	::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

Mango Masala at 16:02, 12 April 2019

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	:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
	::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

Grlucas: Updated link.

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Updated link.

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	== Hassan Essay Edits ==		== Hassan Essay Edits ==

	{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Please see the comments I left for [[~~User talk~~:~~Dmcgonagill/sandbox~~\|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)		{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Please see the comments I left for [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded#Discussion\|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
	:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
			::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Mango Masala at 14:34, 3 April 2019

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	{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Please see the comments I left for [[User talk:Dmcgonagill/sandbox\|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)		{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Please see the comments I left for [[User talk:Dmcgonagill/sandbox\|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
			:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Grlucas: /* Hassan Essay Edits */ new section

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Hassan Essay Edits: new section

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== Hassan Essay Edits ==

{{reply to|Mango Masala}} Please see the comments I left for [[User talk:Dmcgonagill/sandbox|Dillbug]] about her essay draft. Most of these apply to yours as well. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 23:02, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

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	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)		::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]])
			07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)
			:::::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I researched in World Cat to add publishing houses (where I could); I couldn't locate some of the sources. I did include the complete title as some of Hassan's were incomplete.12:35, 24 April 2019 (EDT)

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	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Looking good. Well, Hassan’s citations are incomplete, so they could be left that way — or, you could find his references in [https://www.worldcat.org WorldCat] and complete them. I will move it to the main space when ready. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:45, 17 April 2019 (EDT)

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	:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Thank you, Dr. Lucas. I've cleaned it up quite a bit. For the Works Cited, I removed the page numbers per McKinley's article, but I'm not certain how to find the publishing information for each? I looked in the PM criticism bibliography, but did not find any. Do I leave it as such? Also, do I move it over to PM, or do you? Thanks. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 20:21, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

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	::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} It's looking very good — you've come a long way. Get rid of the Ibid in your refs and just use the author's last name. Other than that, I see just proofreading stuff for now. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 22:44, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

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	:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		:{{reply toGrlucas}} Will do, Dr. Lucas. Thank you for feedback. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 14:34, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
	::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)		::{{reply to\|mango Masala}} I updated the link to my feedback above, as it was incorrect. Sorry about that. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::{{reply to \|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, would you please offer feedback on this Hassan article. Thank you. I am trying to work out where I've gone awry with the notes placement so that {{efn\| }} corresponds accordingly. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 16:02, 12 April 2019 (UTC)