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Grlucas: /* Gordon Article */ Reply.

2019-04-25T18:00:39Z

Gordon Article: Reply.

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	::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I have no idea why I am just now seeing this response, Dr. Lucas. Tell me what I can do to the bibliography and I can work on it today. Josef--[[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 12:42, 25 April 2019 (EDT)		:::::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I have no idea why I am just now seeing this response, Dr. Lucas. Tell me what I can do to the bibliography and I can work on it today. Josef--[[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 12:42, 25 April 2019 (EDT)
			::::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} It's all finished, I believe. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:00, 25 April 2019 (EDT)

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JVbird: /* Gordon Article */

2019-04-25T16:42:35Z

Gordon Article

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	:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	:::::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I have no idea why I am just now seeing this response, Dr. Lucas. Tell me what I can do to the bibliography and I can work on it today. Josef		:::::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I have no idea why I am just now seeing this response, Dr. Lucas. Tell me what I can do to the bibliography and I can work on it today. Josef--[[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 12:42, 25 April 2019 (EDT)

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JVbird: /* Gordon Article */

2019-04-25T16:41:54Z

Gordon Article

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	:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I have no idea why I am just now seeing this response, Dr. Lucas. Tell me what I can do to the bibliography and I can work on it today. Josef

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JVbird: /* Peer Review */

2019-04-15T17:26:10Z

Peer Review

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	• Project Mailer: Your PM biography is well presented and a delight to read! You’ve done very well with the coding and it shows. I know you’ve been persistent about trying to secure permission for your Gordon essay, which has been frustrating. Looking through your discussions, you’ve also been working consistently on your letters and have made good strides. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 18:19, 14 April 2019 (UTC)		• Project Mailer: Your PM biography is well presented and a delight to read! You’ve done very well with the coding and it shows. I know you’ve been persistent about trying to secure permission for your Gordon essay, which has been frustrating. Looking through your discussions, you’ve also been working consistently on your letters and have made good strides. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 18:19, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

			:{{reply to\|Mango Masala}} Thanks so much for your feedback, Mariam. You're way too kind! I definitely have a long way to go with code, but I did realize one thing I've been doing wrong with references, so I'm going to go back and clean some of my posts up today and maybe I'll figure out a few more of the code issues I'm having. Fingers crossed! [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|Jvbird]]) 15:25, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

Mango Masala: Peer Review

2019-04-14T18:19:34Z

Peer Review

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	:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

			==Peer Review==

			• Journal:
			I thoroughly enjoy reading your frequent journal entries. You present your scholarly observations thoughtfully, and I appreciate and learn from your personal experiences in the classroom as both student and educator. Your entries not only reference the current textbook, you often relate what we’re learning to our previous coursework, projects, and discussions, which helps me tremendously and shows your growth within the certificate programme.
			I value your thoughtful feedback, encouragement, and supportive language. You are very much a natural leader and educator.

			• Discussion: You have contributed frequently in all discussions and have worked hard on the coding within Wikipedia to ensure it’s done correctly. Your progress from the first discussion (sourcing) to the most recent (thinking about Wiki) is impressive.

			• Norris Church Mailer Bio: I really appreciate your contributions to the NCM entry. You were discerning as to what information to highlight and you communicated your edits and suggestions often. You worked on it tirelessly. You’ve been careful to present NCM for her own accomplishments and not within the shadow of NM, which is exactly the unbiased voice that Wiki demands.

			• Project Mailer: Your PM biography is well presented and a delight to read! You’ve done very well with the coding and it shows. I know you’ve been persistent about trying to secure permission for your Gordon essay, which has been frustrating. Looking through your discussions, you’ve also been working consistently on your letters and have made good strides. [[User:Mango Masala\|Mango Masala]] ([[User talk:Mango Masala\|talk]]) 18:19, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

Grlucas: /* Gordon Article */ Reply.

2019-04-12T14:48:54Z

Gordon Article: Reply.

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	:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Well, yes! There are dozens. I put several articles from the ''Mailer Review'' that need posting at the [[Talk:An American Dream Expanded\|bottom of the ''AAD'' Expanded talk page]]. {{user\|Roger C. Byrd}} is supposed to choose one of those to post, but I've not heard from him yet. Also, the [[An American Dream Expanded/Bibliography\|''AAD'' bibliography]] needs work. Lots to do... —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

JVbird: /* Gordon Article */

2019-04-12T14:29:16Z

Gordon Article

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	:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Maybe I should just go in and start over with the references. I'll also see if anyone else wants to help out with that. They're just not working, and I've tried to follow the Help:Shortened Footnotes page to the letter, but... Thanks for the reminder about Minor edit! Will do. :) [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]])		:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Maybe I should just go in and start over with the references. I'll also see if anyone else wants to help out with that. They're just not working, and I've tried to follow the Help:Shortened Footnotes page to the letter, but... Thanks for the reminder about Minor edit! Will do. :) [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]])
	::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} It looks like you might have gotten some assistance from a citation bot. Have you checked? You know the issue has nothing to do with the shortened footnotes, right? —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:29, 2 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} It looks like you might have gotten some assistance from a citation bot. Have you checked? You know the issue has nothing to do with the shortened footnotes, right? —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:29, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Nope, but I'll check on that right away. Working on grading some student papers.... But no, I didn't know that the issue isn't with the shortened footnotes. I'll see if I can figure out the problem based on the citation bot info... [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird}})		::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Nope, but I'll check on that right away. Working on grading some student papers.... But no, I didn't know that the issue isn't with the shortened footnotes. I'll see if I can figure out the problem based on the citation bot info... [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|tak}})

			:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

JVbird at 14:45, 10 April 2019

2019-04-10T14:45:08Z

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	:::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I've posted the following NM letters, ready for your review: Deutsch 10/15 Earney 10/15 Whittemore 10/15 Yaminishi 10/16 Morris 10/21 Deutsch 11/4 Earney 11/4 Naiman 11/5 Gwaltney 11/9 Yaminishi 11/26 Skellings 11/26 Susskind 11/26. Let me know if you see anything I need to correct and I'll work on that in the morning. Thanks! Josef [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 23:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I've posted the following NM letters, ready for your review: Deutsch 10/15 Earney 10/15 Whittemore 10/15 Yaminishi 10/16 Morris 10/21 Deutsch 11/4 Earney 11/4 Naiman 11/5 Gwaltney 11/9 Yaminishi 11/26 Skellings 11/26 Susskind 11/26. Let me know if you see anything I need to correct and I'll work on that in the morning. Thanks! Josef [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 23:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Nice work. Check your italics: everything italicized in the originals needs to be here. Link to Wikipedia when appropriate (see some other posted letters as examples); you can also eliminate the parenthetical birth-death dates. Be sure to break up intros, so footnotes correspond to the part of the text they're glossing. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 11:21, 10 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Nice work. Check your italics: everything italicized in the originals needs to be here. Link to Wikipedia when appropriate (see some other posted letters as examples); you can also eliminate the parenthetical birth-death dates. Be sure to break up intros, so footnotes correspond to the part of the text they're glossing. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 11:21, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
			:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Thanks. I'll check over the letters I posted again for these details. Then I'll check to see what else needs contributing to. [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:43, 10 April 2019 (UTC)

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Grlucas: /* Letters */ Reply.

2019-04-10T11:21:14Z

Letters: Reply.

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	:::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I've posted the following NM letters, ready for your review: Deutsch 10/15 Earney 10/15 Whittemore 10/15 Yaminishi 10/16 Morris 10/21 Deutsch 11/4 Earney 11/4 Naiman 11/5 Gwaltney 11/9 Yaminishi 11/26 Skellings 11/26 Susskind 11/26. Let me know if you see anything I need to correct and I'll work on that in the morning. Thanks! Josef [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 23:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I've posted the following NM letters, ready for your review: Deutsch 10/15 Earney 10/15 Whittemore 10/15 Yaminishi 10/16 Morris 10/21 Deutsch 11/4 Earney 11/4 Naiman 11/5 Gwaltney 11/9 Yaminishi 11/26 Skellings 11/26 Susskind 11/26. Let me know if you see anything I need to correct and I'll work on that in the morning. Thanks! Josef [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 23:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
			::::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} Nice work. Check your italics: everything italicized in the originals needs to be here. Link to Wikipedia when appropriate (see some other posted letters as examples); you can also eliminate the parenthetical birth-death dates. Be sure to break up intros, so footnotes correspond to the part of the text they're glossing. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 11:21, 10 April 2019 (UTC)

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JVbird: /* Letters */

2019-04-10T01:25:35Z

Letters

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	:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} they're at https://projectmailer.net/pm/User_talk:JVbird/sandbox [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 20:48, 7 April 2019 (UTC)		:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} they're at https://projectmailer.net/pm/User_talk:JVbird/sandbox [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 20:48, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} No need to use the sandbox; just make ’em real. Also, have a look at [[Talk:Norman Mailer’s Letters on An American Dream, 1963–1969#Final Letter Format\|this post]] before you continue. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:23, 7 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} No need to use the sandbox; just make ’em real. Also, have a look at [[Talk:Norman Mailer’s Letters on An American Dream, 1963–1969#Final Letter Format\|this post]] before you continue. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 23:23, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

			:::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Dr. Lucas, I've posted the following NM letters, ready for your review: Deutsch 10/15 Earney 10/15 Whittemore 10/15 Yaminishi 10/16 Morris 10/21 Deutsch 11/4 Earney 11/4 Naiman 11/5 Gwaltney 11/9 Yaminishi 11/26 Skellings 11/26 Susskind 11/26. Let me know if you see anything I need to correct and I'll work on that in the morning. Thanks! Josef [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 23:23, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

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	:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Maybe I should just go in and start over with the references. I'll also see if anyone else wants to help out with that. They're just not working, and I've tried to follow the Help:Shortened Footnotes page to the letter, but... Thanks for the reminder about Minor edit! Will do. :) [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]])		:::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Maybe I should just go in and start over with the references. I'll also see if anyone else wants to help out with that. They're just not working, and I've tried to follow the Help:Shortened Footnotes page to the letter, but... Thanks for the reminder about Minor edit! Will do. :) [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]])
	::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} It looks like you might have gotten some assistance from a citation bot. Have you checked? You know the issue has nothing to do with the shortened footnotes, right? —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:29, 2 April 2019 (UTC)		::::::{{reply to\|JVbird}} It looks like you might have gotten some assistance from a citation bot. Have you checked? You know the issue has nothing to do with the shortened footnotes, right? —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:29, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
	::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Nope, but I'll check on that right away. Working on grading some student papers.... But no, I didn't know that the issue isn't with the shortened footnotes. I'll see if I can figure out the problem based on the citation bot info... [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird}})		::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} Nope, but I'll check on that right away. Working on grading some student papers.... But no, I didn't know that the issue isn't with the shortened footnotes. I'll see if I can figure out the problem based on the citation bot info... [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|tak}})

			:::::::::{{reply to\|Grlucas}} I think I need more practice with creating citations and references. Is there aother NM article in the shared drive that needs posting? [[User:JVbird\|JVbird]] ([[User talk:JVbird\|talk]]) 13:27, 12 April 2019 (UTC)