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	My attempt at creating a draft article failed by creating a new page. My next attempt will be using the user page to create the draft article, is this correct?[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)Kenneth Wilcox, July 8, 2021, 10:21am[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)		My attempt at creating a draft article failed by creating a new page. My next attempt will be using the user page to create the draft article, is this correct?[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)Kenneth Wilcox, July 8, 2021, 10:21am[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)
	:{{Reply to\|KWilcox}} As I said: please post all questions for project 2 on Wikipedia. This is an inappropriate forum for them. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:27, 8 July 2021 (EDT)		:{{Reply to\|KWilcox}} As I said: please post all questions for project 2 on Wikipedia. This is an inappropriate forum for them. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:27, 8 July 2021 (EDT)

			Hello, Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. May I have the banner removed?[[User:KJordan\|KJordan]] ([[User talk:KJordan\|talk]]) 20:13, 22 September 2020 (EDT)KJordan
			:{{Reply to\|KJordan}} Maybe. You should always link to something you want me to have a look at, please. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 20:14, 22 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You. Here is a link to it: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Heart_of_the_Nation:_Jewish_Values_in_the_Fiction_of_Norman_Mailer --[[User:AMurray\|AMurray]] ([[User talk:AMurray\|talk]]) 21:56, 23 September 2020 (EDT)

			:{{Reply to\|AMurray}} Looking good! However, I still see quote a few typos. There should be no space before a footnote or citation.<ref>Like this.</ref> And all parenthetical citations need to be converted. I also see a lot of missing punctuation, especially around citations. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:24, 24 September 2020 (EDT)

			{{Reflist}}

			Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. Will you please review?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Unknown_and_the_General --[[User:Jrdavisjr\|Jrdavisjr]] ([[User talk:Jrdavisjr\|talk]]) 09:00, 25 September 2020 (EDT)
			:{{Reply to\| Jrdavisjr}} It looks good. Let's go through editing week and see if anything else comes up. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:15, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JSheppard/sandbox [[User:JSheppard\|JSheppard]] ([[User talk:JSheppard\|talk]])
			:{{Reply to\| JSheppard}} You have a '''lot''' of work left to do. I see [[User:Jules Carry]] is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I finished my article.
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know
			[[User:RWalsh\|RWalsh]] ([[User talk:RWalsh\|talk]]) 15:15, 8 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{reply to\|RWalsh}} Not quite, but it's looking good. Clean it up and begin helping others. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:11, 9 February 2021 (EST)

			Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished editing my article. Will you please review?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/%E2%80%9CHer_Problems_Were_Everyone%E2%80%99s_Problems%E2%80%9D:_Self_and_Gender_in_The_Deer_Park [[User:Klcrawford\|Klcrawford]] ([[User talk:Klcrawford\|talk]]) 09:06, 15 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|Klcrawford}} Great work. I have removed the working banner. I would appreciate it if you began to assist some of the other editors. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 13:04, 15 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself [[User:JFordyce\|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce\|talk]]) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce

			Hello Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished my article. Can you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Request [[User:EKrauskopf\|EKrauskopf]] ([[User talk:EKrauskopf\|talk]]) 13:06, 22 Februrary 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|EKrauskopf}} OK, looks good. Well done. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 06:41, 23 February 2021 (EST)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished and cleaned up my article. Could you please review it?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know [[User:RWalsh\|RWalsh]] ([[User talk:RWalsh\|talk]]) 12:35, 23 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|RWalsh}} OK, nice job. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 13:47, 23 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello Dr.Lucas final edits have been made and the article is finished.https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself[[User:JFordyce\|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce\|talk]]) 22:27, 2 March 2021 (EST) JFordyce

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			== Article Errors ==
			I've added the body of the article to my sandbox page. What errors do I need to specifically change in order to make it correct?[[User:CDucharme\|CDucharme]] ([[User talk:CDucharme\|talk]]) 17:04, 14 September 2020 (EDT)
			:{{Reply to\|CDucharme}} Mostly you need to add the notes, citation, and read for typos. It’s meticulous, but that’s the job. (Thanks for signing.) —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 17:08, 14 September 2020 (EDT)

			Hey, I need help with instructions for the Norman Mailer Bibliography for the remediation project. I am not sure what I am supposed to do.[[User:AJohnson\|AJohnson]] ([[User talk:AJohnson\|talk]]) 29 March 2021 (EDT)
			:{{Reply to\|AJohnson}} You need to remediate the bibliography by adding missing entries from the PDF to the article on this site using the correct templates. As the note on the bibliography says, you may use [[The Mailer Review/Volume 2, 2008/Norman Mailer Bibliography: 2007\|Norman Mailer Bibliography: 2007]] as a model. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 14:48, 29 March 2021 (EDT)

	Hello, Dr. Lucas! I have completed remediation on [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/The American Civil War in The Naked and the Dead and Across the River and Into the Trees]]. Can you please let me know if there's anything I need to correct? Thanks so much! [[User:KaraCroissant\|KaraCroissant]] ([[User talk:KaraCroissant\|talk]]) 17:11, 1 April 2025 (EDT)		Hello, Dr. Lucas! I have completed remediation on [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/The American Civil War in The Naked and the Dead and Across the River and Into the Trees]]. Can you please let me know if there's anything I need to correct? Thanks so much! [[User:KaraCroissant\|KaraCroissant]] ([[User talk:KaraCroissant\|talk]]) 17:11, 1 April 2025 (EDT)

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Hello, Dr. Lucas! I have completed remediation on [[The Mailer Review/Volume 4, 2010/The American Civil War in The Naked and the Dead and Across the River and Into the Trees]]. Can you please let me know if there's anything I need to correct? Thanks so much! [[User:KaraCroissant|KaraCroissant]] ([[User talk:KaraCroissant|talk]]) 17:11, 1 April 2025 (EDT)
:{{Reply to|KaraCroissant}} great work! A couple of things: never bury your talk page post. Put it at the bottom, preferably in its own section by clicking "Add topic" on the top-right. Other than that—great job! I have removed the banner, so you are free to help with the rest of the volume. Thanks! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 08:58, 3 April 2025 (EDT)

Hi, Dr. Lucas. I think I have finished my PM article:[[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/Hemingway_to_Mailer_—_A_Delayed_Response_to_The_Deer_Park|Hemingway to Mailer-A Delayed Response to The Deer Park]]. Please let me know if there is anything else needed from me. [[User:Hobbitonya|Hobbitonya]] ([[User talk:Hobbitonya|talk]]) 17:54, 2 April 2025 (EDT)
:{{Reply to|Hobbitonya}} nice work. A couple of things: never bury your talk page post. Put it at the bottom, preferably in its own section by clicking "Add topic" on the top-right. Look at punctuation placement and footnotes; commas go inside quotation marks; punctuation goes before footnotes. You still have some citation issues. Note the read errors at the bottom of the page. These need to be gone. (Check the Mailer 1963 short footnote; there is no corresponding citation for 1963.) Thanks! —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 08:58, 3 April 2025 (EDT)

Hi Dr. Lucas. I think I have finished my article: https://projectmailer.net/index.php?title=The_Mailer_Review/Volume_4,_2010/Ernest_and_Norman:_A_Dialogue_in_Two_Acts&oldid=17870
Please let me know if there is anything I need to fix. Also, let me know if the link is working. [[User:DSánchez|DSánchez]] ([[User talk:DSánchez|talk]]) 17:13, 3 April 2025 (EDT)
:{{Reply to| DSánchez}} looks good. I removed the banner, but please remove all the links. I understand what you were trying to do, but it's unnecessary. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 07:13, 4 April 2025 (EDT)

==Article Request==
Dr. Lucas. I have started working on another article. Would you be able to send me the PDF of "The Savage Poet-- Unlocking the Universe With Metaphor" so that I can help add to the article? [[User:Klcrawford|Klcrawford]] ([[User talk:Klcrawford|talk]]) 18:24, 23 February 2021 (EST)
:{{Reply to|Klcrawford}} Done. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 07:46, 24 February 2021 (EST)

== When we Were Kings 1st remediation ==

[[The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary|https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/When_We_Were_Kings:_Review_and_Commentary]]

Here is the link for the remediation I did for this weeks assignment. I did not now where to place the link.

Thank you,
Trevor Ryals
:{{Reply to|TRyals}} Thank you, but this is unnecessary. Just do the work; I promise I will see it. (And be sure to sign your talk page posts.) —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 18:16, 2 February 2021 (EST)

==Summer 2021==
Can you please review my article? I have a couple errors that I do not understand how to fix. Other than that, I am finished. https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:PLowery/sandbox

Can you review my article again please? I think I might be done. [[User:PLowery|PLowery]] ([[User talk:PLowery|talk]])
:{{Reply to|PLowery}} In order for you to be finished, your entire article must be posted [[The Mailer Review/Volume 3, 2009/A Favor for the Ages|in the mainspace]]. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 07:29, 21 June 2021 (EDT)
::Done
:::I believe I have it done correctly now.

My topic person is Marion Stegeman Hodgson,however she was not my first choice. There are four others who initially chose Hodgson, Tyler McMillan, Elizabeth Webb, Caleb Andrews, and Marguerite Walker. I haven't gotten in touch with either classmate as of this date however.[[User:KWilcox|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox|talk]])Kenneth Wilcox(KWilcox)July 7, 2021[[User:KWilcox|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox|talk]])
:{{Reply to|KWilcox}} This work should be done on Wikipedia. Please post all questions and work about project 2 on Wikipedia. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 09:12, 8 July 2021 (EDT)

My attempt at creating a draft article failed by creating a new page. My next attempt will be using the user page to create the draft article, is this correct?[[User:KWilcox|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)Kenneth Wilcox, July 8, 2021, 10:21am[[User:KWilcox|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)
:{{Reply to|KWilcox}} As I said: please post all questions for project 2 on Wikipedia. This is an inappropriate forum for them. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas|talk]]) 10:27, 8 July 2021 (EDT)

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	My attempt at creating a draft article failed by creating a new page. My next attempt will be using the user page to create the draft article, is this correct?[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)Kenneth Wilcox, July 8, 2021, 10:21am[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)		My attempt at creating a draft article failed by creating a new page. My next attempt will be using the user page to create the draft article, is this correct?[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)Kenneth Wilcox, July 8, 2021, 10:21am[[User:KWilcox\|KWilcox]] ([[User talk:KWilcox\|talk]]) 10:22, 8 July 2021 (EDT)
	:{{Reply to\|KWilcox}} As I said: please post all questions for project 2 on Wikipedia. This is an inappropriate forum for them. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:27, 8 July 2021 (EDT)		:{{Reply to\|KWilcox}} As I said: please post all questions for project 2 on Wikipedia. This is an inappropriate forum for them. Thank you. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:27, 8 July 2021 (EDT)

			Hello, Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. May I have the banner removed?[[User:KJordan\|KJordan]] ([[User talk:KJordan\|talk]]) 20:13, 22 September 2020 (EDT)KJordan
			:{{Reply to\|KJordan}} Maybe. You should always link to something you want me to have a look at, please. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 20:14, 22 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You. Here is a link to it: https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Heart_of_the_Nation:_Jewish_Values_in_the_Fiction_of_Norman_Mailer --[[User:AMurray\|AMurray]] ([[User talk:AMurray\|talk]]) 21:56, 23 September 2020 (EDT)

			:{{Reply to\|AMurray}} Looking good! However, I still see quote a few typos. There should be no space before a footnote or citation.<ref>Like this.</ref> And all parenthetical citations need to be converted. I also see a lot of missing punctuation, especially around citations. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:24, 24 September 2020 (EDT)

			{{Reflist}}

			Dr. Lucas, I finished editing my article. Will you please review?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_2,_2008/The_Unknown_and_the_General --[[User:Jrdavisjr\|Jrdavisjr]] ([[User talk:Jrdavisjr\|talk]]) 09:00, 25 September 2020 (EDT)
			:{{Reply to\| Jrdavisjr}} It looks good. Let's go through editing week and see if anything else comes up. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 10:15, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished editing my article. Can you please review it? Thank You
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/User:JSheppard/sandbox [[User:JSheppard\|JSheppard]] ([[User talk:JSheppard\|talk]])
			:{{Reply to\| JSheppard}} You have a '''lot''' of work left to do. I see [[User:Jules Carry]] is helping, but you’re missing references and there are typos throughout. Keep working. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 17:19, 25 September 2020 (EDT)

			Dr. Lucas, I finished my article.
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know
			[[User:RWalsh\|RWalsh]] ([[User talk:RWalsh\|talk]]) 15:15, 8 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{reply to\|RWalsh}} Not quite, but it's looking good. Clean it up and begin helping others. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 07:11, 9 February 2021 (EST)

			Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished editing my article. Will you please review?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/%E2%80%9CHer_Problems_Were_Everyone%E2%80%99s_Problems%E2%80%9D:_Self_and_Gender_in_The_Deer_Park [[User:Klcrawford\|Klcrawford]] ([[User talk:Klcrawford\|talk]]) 09:06, 15 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|Klcrawford}} Great work. I have removed the working banner. I would appreciate it if you began to assist some of the other editors. Thanks. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 13:04, 15 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello Dr. Lucas, I have been making some edits, I am still looking to see if there is more, can you look through and give any feedback?https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself [[User:JFordyce\|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce\|talk]]) 18:27, 20 February 2021 (EST)JFordyce

			Hello Dr. Lucas, I believe I have finished my article. Can you please review it? https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Request [[User:EKrauskopf\|EKrauskopf]] ([[User talk:EKrauskopf\|talk]]) 13:06, 22 Februrary 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|EKrauskopf}} OK, looks good. Well done. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 06:41, 23 February 2021 (EST)

			Dr. Lucas, I have finished and cleaned up my article. Could you please review it?
			https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/More_Than_The_Dead_Know [[User:RWalsh\|RWalsh]] ([[User talk:RWalsh\|talk]]) 12:35, 23 February 2021 (EST)
			:{{Reply to\|RWalsh}} OK, nice job. Now please begin assisting others on getting volume 9 finished. —[[User:Grlucas\|Grlucas]] ([[User talk:Grlucas\|talk]]) 13:47, 23 February 2021 (EST)

			Hello Dr.Lucas final edits have been made and the article is finished.https://projectmailer.net/pm/The_Mailer_Review/Volume_13,_2019/Angst,_Authorship,_Critics:_“The_Snows_of_Kilimanjaro,”_“The_Crack-Up,”_Advertisements_for_Myself[[User:JFordyce\|JFordyce]] ([[User talk:JFordyce\|talk]]) 22:27, 2 March 2021 (EST) JFordyce