The Mailer Review/Volume 13, 2019/The Child - Revision history

Grlucas: Reverted edits by APerry (talk) to last revision by Grlucas

2021-03-03T14:52:45Z

Reverted edits by APerry (talk) to last revision by Grlucas

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	{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}		{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}
	{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"		{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"
	\|<div style="text-align: center;">		\|<div style="text-align: center;">

	~~'''The Child'''~~

	~~Sal Centrano~~

	For years I’ve tried to bury<br />		For years I’ve tried to bury<br />
	the child in me: that last proud<br />		the child in me: that last proud<br />

APerry: title changes

2021-03-03T02:17:27Z

title changes

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	'''The Child'''		'''The Child'''

	Sal Centrano		Sal Centrano

APerry: title Changes

2021-03-03T02:16:42Z

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	'''The Child'''		'''The Child'''
	Sal Centrano		Sal Centrano

	For years I’ve tried to bury<br />		For years I’ve tried to bury<br />
	the child in me: that last proud<br />		the child in me: that last proud<br />

APerry: title changes

2021-03-03T02:16:19Z

title changes

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	{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}		{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}
	~~<div class~~=~~"center"~~ style="width: ~~auto~~; ~~margin~~-~~left~~: ~~auto; margin-right: auto~~;"~~>'''The Child'''</div~~>		{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"
			\|<div style="text-align: center;">

	~~<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">~~Sal ~~Cetrano</div>~~		'''The Child'''
			Sal Centrano
	~~{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"~~
	~~\|<div style="text-align: center;">~~
	For years I’ve tried to bury<br />		For years I’ve tried to bury<br />
	the child in me: that last proud<br />		the child in me: that last proud<br />

APerry at 02:15, 3 March 2021

2021-03-03T02:15:21Z

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	{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}		{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}
			<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">'''The Child'''</div>

			<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">Sal Cetrano</div>

	{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"		{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"
	\|<div style="text-align: center;">		\|<div style="text-align: center;">

Grlucas: Fixed.

2021-03-01T21:57:29Z

Fixed.

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	{{DISPLAYTITLE:<span style="font-size:22px;">{{BASEPAGENAME}}/</span>{{SUBPAGENAME}}}}		{{DISPLAYTITLE:<span style="font-size:22px;">{{BASEPAGENAME}}/</span>{{SUBPAGENAME}}}}
	{{MR13}}		{{MR13}}
	{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal~~\|note=For David Koresh~~\|url=http://prmlr.us/~~mr13cet1~~}}		{{byline\|last=Cetrano\|first=Sal\|url=http://prmlr.us/mr13cet2}}
	~~<div class~~=~~"center"~~ style="width: ~~auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto~~;"~~>'''The Child'''</div>~~		{\| cellpadding=5 style="width: 50%;"
	<div ~~class="center"~~ style="~~width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin~~-~~right~~: ~~auto;">Sal Cetrano</div>~~		\|<div style="text-align: center;">
	~~<div class="~~center~~" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto~~;">		For years I’ve tried to bury<br />
	~~<poem>~~For years I’ve tried to bury		the child in me: that last proud<br />
	the child in me: that last proud		barber pole I stood in front of<br />
	barber pole I stood in front of		as a boy, the new housing project,<br />
	as a boy, the new housing project,		chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,<br />
	chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,		poverty just a spelling word.<br /><br />
	poverty just a spelling word.</~~poem~~>		To rate responsibility, I’ve tried <br />
			to rid myself of selfish <br />
			evasion. It’s just as well<br />
			that I move to Nepal! <br />
			Someone believes, someone bleeds. <br />
			A girl bolts screaming from bed,<br /><br />
			her hands pathetic wild birds,<br />
			a wooden man plods from<br />
			the house of his single mind.<br />
			At such times, when the cover<br />
			is torn off catalog comforts<br />
			and nothing grown seems full,<br /><br />
			the child sliding head-first<br />
			into home, center of a good idea,<br />
			dustily rises, clear on the score,<br />
			and the words that passed for life<br />
			go in one ear and out the other,<br />
			a naughty habit never broken.
	</div>		</div>
			\|}

	~~<div class~~=~~"center" style="width~~: ~~auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">~~		{{Review\|state=expanded}}
	~~<poem>~~		{{DEFAULTSORT:Child, The}}
	~~her hands pathetic wild birds,~~		[[Category:Poetry (MR)]]
	~~a wooden man plods from~~
	~~the house of his single mind.~~
	~~At such times~~, ~~when the cover~~
	~~is torn off catalog comforts~~
	~~and nothing grown seems full,</poem></div>~~

	~~<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right~~: ~~auto;">~~
	~~<poem>~~
	~~the child sliding head-first~~
	~~into home, center of a good idea,~~
	~~dustily rises, clear on the score,~~
	~~and the words that passed for life~~
	~~go in one ear and out the other,~~
	~~a naughty habit never broken.~~
	~~</poem></div>~~

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APerry at 02:19, 28 February 2021

2021-02-28T02:19:05Z

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 barber pole I stood in front of
 as a boy, the new housing project,
-chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>
+chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,

APerry at 02:16, 28 February 2021

2021-02-28T02:16:52Z

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	as a boy, the new housing project,		as a boy, the new housing project,
	chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>		chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>

	~~<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">~~
	~~<poem>~~
	~~poverty just a spelling word.~~
	~~To rate responsibility, I’ve tried~~
	~~to rid myself of selfish~~
	~~evasion. It’s just as well~~
	~~that I move to Nepal!~~
	~~Someone believes, someone bleeds.~~
	~~A girl bolts screaming from bed,</poem></div>~~

APerry at 02:16, 28 February 2021

2021-02-28T02:16:38Z

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 barber pole I stood in front of
 as a boy, the new housing project,
-chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat, poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>
+chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>
 <div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
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 Someone believes, someone bleeds.
 A girl bolts screaming from bed,</poem></div>

APerry: trying to have the center text align properly

2021-02-28T02:09:53Z

trying to have the center text align properly

← Older revision		Revision as of 22:09, 27 February 2021
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	barber pole I stood in front of		barber pole I stood in front of
	as a boy, the new housing project,		as a boy, the new housing project,
	chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat,</poem></div>		chain-lined walks, blacktop sweat, poverty just a spelling word.</poem></div>

	<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">		<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
	<poem>		<poem>
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	that I move to Nepal!		that I move to Nepal!
	Someone believes, someone bleeds.		Someone believes, someone bleeds.
	A girl bolts screaming from bed,		A girl bolts screaming from bed,</poem></div>

			<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
			<poem>
	her hands pathetic wild birds,		her hands pathetic wild birds,
	a wooden man plods from		a wooden man plods from
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	At such times, when the cover		At such times, when the cover
	is torn off catalog comforts		is torn off catalog comforts
	and nothing grown seems full,		and nothing grown seems full,</poem></div>

			<div class="center" style="width: auto; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
			<poem>
	the child sliding head-first		the child sliding head-first
	into home, center of a good idea,		into home, center of a good idea,